NAPREDATOR (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

Your a pretty good actor.

ShermerIllinois (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

What's the song at the end or is it original? I like it. 'Tis tight.

CeLeoLestial (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

Very interesting. You have a good eye and you're completely unconventional (thank god!). You're acting was fine in this vid. But then, I'm no pro. ~CeLeoLestial

aznflayva (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

This is by far my most fave vid you have done..

nbediamola (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

no one, unless they grew up in another galaxy, has to taste gasoline in order to identify it. i liked it up to that point; good rhythm and compostition- i like the sounds alot

princessHikarimono (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

omg.... o.o poor dog..

moneyhouse (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

I cna edit this alot if you guys think it flows bad, and i can adjust the brightness and stuff, but i cant refilm andything, Everything has to be done with editing. Im still open for any critisism you have though....

moneyhouse (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

im not great at acting, do u have any adive on how to show more emotion without the acting? i cant reshoot it.. I'll change the last shot up for you in the next version thanx for the comment

nbediamola (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

good job the story was told well, it's nice to see m'house showing more of the cards in his hand.. . i think the more emotions you can get the better this will be. i thought the last shot of the desert skeleton was trite, but it looked cool when it became long shot. keep workin

lonnypaul (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

Incredible story line!